What do you do when every action comes to naught
You get defeat in all the battles you have fought
Sadness envelopes everything like a stifling smog
The future seems covered with the densest fog
Can someone show me the way I need to take
I have reached a point where I really cannot fake
Emotions, Actions and Thoughts at cross-roads
Time to take stock, let the truth come clean from the shadow of the shrouds.
**What do you do when every action comes to naught
ReplyDeleteYou get defeat in all the battles you have fought
Sadness envelopes everything like a stifling smog
The future seems covered with the densest fog
=> i take a break and go for a vacation!
**Can someone show me the way I need to take
I have reached a point where I really cannot fake
Emotions, Actions and Thoughts at cross-roads
Time to take stock, let the truth come clean from the shadow of the shrouds.
=> what does your heart say not to do, i guess thats exactly what u have to do!
hey, whats going on here.. every body is trying his/her hands on poetry..
ReplyDeleteokay.. dont intend to spoil the beauty of it but cant help from cracking in few PJs.. I see so many questions here and getting desperate to answer few of them
- What do you do when every action comes to naught
-- "balika ye shani ki grah dasha hai" so sit tight :)
- The future seems covered with the densest fog
-- its December gurl.. so fog has to be there..
- Can someone show me the way I need to take
-- I am yet to find the way to that remote island.. so stay tuned..
- Time to take stock
-- its year ending alright.. so time to take stocks indeed
hey sen - hope you dont mind it dear.. and feel free to delete the crap or the complete comment :)
yeah..Time!
ReplyDeleteTime brings in all answers:)
maybe we should never lose faith at any crossroad...strong lines there, Sen.
some emotions can be captured only in poetry, i guess..most of us r gradually turning poetic n how!!
great going..keep it up!
P.S: the guy's PJ's were funny..forgive me coz i laughed:)
@ sawan...I need to create a fulltime backup at work first...then will they let me on a vacation...thanks but I have stopped taking directions form my heart...hence the appeal for guidance to the cosmos...
ReplyDelete@ ST...why will I delete the comment??
I am entitled to write crap poetry, you ar entitled to crack superb PJ's on it :))
@vin...yeah my half baked effort :))
vin - hmm.. emotions and poetry.. what about our emotions who can't dare to play with words ;) I am getting inferiority complex.. :(
ReplyDeletesen - remember my post... we can't even have a vacation in peace.. huh..
regarding comment delete - I know you write such beautiful words and I put my crap in between :)) hope you dont mind it
and if its half baked what would be fully baked like :D
@ ST...I don't mind at all...I take it as constructive critisism...my next poem will be that much better thanks to your PJ's...I will ensure that they are PJ proof :))
ReplyDeletesen - in our profession (software development) there is a joke -
ReplyDelete"Programming today is a race between software engineers striving to build bigger and better idiot-proof programs, and the universe trying to produce bigger and better idiots. So far, the universe is winning."
so this holds true every where.. let us wait for your PJ proof poem and see who wins :))
@ ST...good one...the bet is on!!!
ReplyDeleteWell guys, the last few comments got too software friendly... Cudn't find words to comment!!
ReplyDeleteStill if I try to comment, I wud say 'Senorita, bade bade deshon mein choti choti baatein hoti rehti hain'... :)
Sick one I think..
ReplyDeleteMy comment I meant guys..
ReplyDeleteBoth my MM (Mumbai Mates) are gr8 in poetry.. Lol @ Scattered thoughts... My brain is empty with no ideas fr posts running and i was commenting to my Posts' response.. Read u r gonna get a Hand on JTYJN.. Have u??
ReplyDeleteI thought of trying PJ's lik ST but gave up as i don wanna mock ur poems and gt curses frm u.. Its nice!!
ReplyDelete@ Sur... thanks for stopping by...yeah true they do, I feel like I was making a mountain out of a molehill with that poem, today I am much better :)
ReplyDeleteI would not have minded if you called the poem sic as well, you are entitled to your view :)
@ Karthik...thanks,what!!! lil ol me, curse the next P.G.Wodehouse!!!!!!Sacrilege!!!!
ReplyDeleteNo way, you are welcome to post all the PJ's you can think of :))
Now I am dying to see JTYJN...so much talk about the movie...I just have to see it!!!!
sur - dear you was supposed to comment on our lil old poetess efforts not on my comments :P
ReplyDeletekarthik - nah.. not yet buddy.. sparing 3 hours for a movie and then finding out its a crap is too much.. writing a blog post looks like more lucrative deal some times :)
sen - you stumped me with… "I feel like I was making a mountain out of a molehill with that poem, today I am much better" :(
@ ST... let it pass...you dont want to know :))
ReplyDeletesen - scratching my head :(
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