Friday, 8 January 2010

The Breakup

My first attempt at fiction...let me know what you think.

She: "Is there an us or am I imagining a little too much ??... I am confused and really need to know."

He: "Us in the sense??"

She : "You know what, I read something the other day, Things are to be used and People are to be loved, but the sad reality is that People are used and Things loved..."

He: "What do you mean by that statement?"

She: "All I want is a straight answer to my question, I am getting emotionally involved and need to know if there is something, else I need to step back right now."

He: "Night is to forget the bad, remember the good, and await the happenning of tommorrow. Happy end to the day."

She: "Fine, I am not in the mood for poetry, and I am through with this treatment, happy end to everything."

He: "Wish you the same, btw, the hardest thing to express is the simplest of all...affection."

She: "All I need is an answer to my question."

He: "What question??"

She: "This has got to stop, just spare me."

He : "Spared."

She: "Don't call me anymore."

He: "Dont worry, I won't."

She: "Why did it have to end like this, were you never serious about us for even a moment?"

He: "Who proclaimed the end, me or you?"

She: "I can't take this insecurity any more..."

He: "I am always there for you when you need me."

She: "As a friend or something more, just spit it out, don't worry about my feelings, thats my problem."

He: "What should I say..."

She: "Yes or No, let me be in peace once and for all..."

He: "Peace be unto you, thats what they say in church."

She: "Fine, Sorry for taking up so much of your time, it is clear that you see me only are a friend and nothing more and I just can't be your friend."

He: "As you wish."

9 comments:

  1. Way to go, Sen. Looking forward to more.

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  2. Its good. I am sure a Big story is on its way.

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  3. Seno, it touched me, a lil too hard. let my tears acknowledge the perfection in ur story.

    fiction it might be for u, for me it just brought back memories :)

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  4. @ Sush, Tarun... Thanks... will try to build it forward...

    @ Sawan... sorry if it brought back hurtful memories... that was not the intent...

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  5. eyy :) its okie. hope u r fit n fine :) long time since we talked. iin touch with vinnie? wud catch up some time.

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  6. @ Sawan... yeah long time :) Nope lost touch...

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  7. Nice attempt for the first one. I would love to see you diverge from the play/script writing format towards writing vignettes. I have a feeling you'll do great. ;)

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  8. well nice one, looking forward to some more fiction/non-fiction :)

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  9. @ AT.. thanks for that :)

    @ Lincoln.. thanks :)

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